Hmmm...
Do you have a membership to a photo-sharing site like photobucket? If the forum upload facility isn't working for you (I've never used it - didn't even know you could DO that directly. So I'm no help), then perhaps uploading via a third party is the way to go. Then you just have to link the pic once it's uploaded.
yea i can use the occasional punctuation,i dont want know one eyes to fall out.as i stated im from Et. NE as for the pic,he's a small mantas there was that up to everyone'standard?
Better - easier to read when the thoughts are separated. I can't speak for everyone's standards (and I know it's now ABOVE certain members' standards - those who STILL don't use punctuation. I simply don't read those posts. It hurts too much), but since you're actually trying to improve your posting style, I will offer a few more notes:
You still missed a few opportunites for a "." or a "," - for example "He's a small mantis" should have been followe with a "." That next part was a new thought.
First letter in any sentence should be a capital.
Reference to yourself ("I") should be capital.
After a comma there should be one space, after a period, two.
Choose the correct spelling of the word you want to use when more than one choice is available, and the spelling changes the meaning. In this example, "know" = information in your head. You meant "no," as in the opposite of "yes."
Also, the structure of that statement was a double negative - you don't want no one's eyes....The affect is that you really just said you DO want SOMEONE's eyes to fall out (which yoy may have accomplished
). What you should write is "I don't want ANYone's eyes..."
Thanks for putting in the effort to make your posts better. I can't tell you how many people (both that I've seen corrected by others, and that I've corrected myself) just have a tantrum and get defensive. You didn't do that, and I appreciate it.
I'm certainly not pulitzer prize winner writer - not even close. However I do endevour to convey my idea correctly. It makes a big difference with how people perceive you online, where the only information they have on you is in your profice, and in your presentation.
I've been on this forum long enough that most of these people already know I'm a pretentious jerk
, but I think I at least had them fooled for a while.
Oh, one other thing (and this goes for everybody) - NEVER use the expression "very unique." I will release the ninjas.