Hello. I have some photos of mantids you can use in my gallery on this mantidforum. Go to here:
http://mantidforum.net/forums/index.php?showuser=5913
Then look for the Gallery button.
On your website, page "
Home". Some corrections or better ways of writing and just comments I made are in these things:
<Yada yada yada> beside your sentence I am talking about. I hope you understand me.
I am often asked what are these insects (otherwise known as
Preying Mantis or
Prey Mantis), what they eat do they
bite and are praying mantis
<add plural "praying mantises" instead of "praying mantis"> endangered? In particular
Praying Mantis – Mantodea assigned insects which counted up to 2,400 species of them. They are common in warm and tropical countries, they are a large, predatory, diurnal insects
<I am not sure if they should be called diurnal because they are active during the night> and usually are green in color
<Mantises have many colors. I would say just that they are often green because brown is a very common color for mantises also. Or just say "and are usually brown or green in color">. They have a well -developed wings and wing- they are usually translucent glass
<This sentence is hard for me to understand.>. These insects have a
<Take out the "a". Make it "These insects have very strong front legs" instead of "These insects have a very strong front legs" because you are not just talking about one leg> very strong front legs (
attacking legs<I do not think Attacking legs sounds good. I think those front legs can be called raptorial legs http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raptorial>). By their help the praying mantis can
bite his food, front leg shank a recess through which they can bend their legs as fold knife blade
<This sentence is hard to understand, sorry.>.
They are equipped with sharp studs<Instead of "studs" you might want to say "spikes", but I guess "studs" is alright> which help to keep until he is eager tofeed on prey escape <"which help to keep until he is eager tofeed on prey escape". This might be a better sentence "which helps to keep the prey from escaping until he is eager to feed". I have trouble understanding that sentence so you might mean "which helps to keep the prey from escaping while the mantis eats">.
Typically, females are larger than males, and
sometimes mate attacks or even eats them <I would change that sentence to "Typically, females are larger than males, and sometimes the female attacks the male or even eats the male while mating.">. The body is oblong -shaped. Head is triangular and very flexible as well. They have a very large eyes with a total of 3 of them. The praying mantis can see movement up to 60 feet away.
This insect makes an excellent pet. It is small, has minimal care requirements and can be left alone for several days
<They cannot always be left alone for a few days, sometimes they need care daily.>. However, their life span is very short, they usually only live for one season (called praying mantis life cycle). Nevertheless, it is
<add "an" so that it will be "it is an endlessly interesting exotic pet"> endlessly interesting exotic pet that will surprise you everyday with their beauty and exclusivity .
Guide
Care Sheet
This is the basic information which may be required for the production <By "production" do you mean to "raise"?> of these animals.
Food and Diet
Everything you need to know
<I am not so sure if it is good to say Everything you need to know, because you probably do not have everything you need to know about how and what to feed them.>. What does a praying mantis eat and how to take care of their health.
